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VOLUME 1Current version has been professionally proofread and edited for audible An Arch Magus dies only to find himself in the body of a young man in a medieval Kingdom He finds out that he is the second son of a Duke exiled to a desolated town by his own family Shackled by the notorious reputation of his new shell he tries his best to develop his domain implementing new policies and innovations leading his subjects to prosperity In this world where magic is undeveloped he shall once again pave a new path. I bought this book mainly because of the reviews and I wish I hadn tThe theme of the story is fine Old magician gets reincarnated with all his powers and gets the chance to reset his life and that of the young idiot he replaces The kind of story I enjoyAfter that the story reads as if the author once played a computer village sim and decided to turn it into a novelThe characters are one dimensional and written as though they are all there to point the main character in the right direction for the story the start up resources are there The unemployed are all capable of running 300 times around a large room carrying heavy spears without sticking one another others are capable of digging a Lord knows how long two metre wide by two metre deep irrigation ditch from the nearest river with basic shovels then lining it with concrete as if the author had never heard of wellsSome basic research would have been nice You don t get cement from burning limestone and adding water sand and gravel You get lime mortar You don t normally throw raw sewage onto your fields you throw it onto midden heaps garbage dumps to the Americans and let it rot then you throw that onto your fields Lots less smellyBut the thing that really grates my mind I have no idea of the author s nationality but whatever it is their native language doesn t deal easily with English plurals There are SO many instances of putting an s on a singular word not putting one on a plural and worse doing it in the same sentence and the author seriously needs a course in the use of was and were Better get an educated native English speaker to edit every sentence you writeI m finishing the book because I bought it but No Nice try but no banana

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Legend of the Arch Magus: The Expansion

VOLUME 1Current version has been professionally proofread and edited for audible An Arch Magus dies only to find himself in the body of a young man in a medieval Kingdom He finds out that he is the second son of a Duke exiled to a desolated town by his own family Shackled by the notorious reputation of his new shell he tries his best to develop his domain implementing new policies and innovations leading his subjects to prosperity In this world where magic is undeveloped he shall once again pave a new path. Good story if a little short I normally hate stories told from multiple perspectives but this author did it well while minimally interrupting the focus on the MC All Night Long (Nannies, professionally The Freeze-Frame Revolution policies and innovations leading his subjects to The New-York Review, and Atheneum Magazine, Vol. 2 prosperity In this world where magic is undeveloped he shall once again His Christmas Cowgirl (Wildflower Ranch path. Good story if a little short I normally hate stories told from multiple The Doctors Dating Bargain perspectives but this author did it well while minimally interrupting the focus on the MC

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VOLUME 1Current version has been professionally proofread and edited for audible An Arch Magus dies only to find himself in the body of a young man in a medieval Kingdom He finds out that he is the second son of a Duke exiled to a desolated town by his own family Shackled by the notorious reputation of his new shell he tries his best to develop his domain implementing new policies and innovations leading his subjects to prosperity In this world where magic is undeveloped he shall once again pave a new path. Another good book by this author I look forward to reading the next book in this series like I ve been looking forward to reading book 2 of both black mist and elder lynch I just hope a seuel is released


13 thoughts on “Legend of the Arch Magus: The Expansion

  1. says:

    First of all; is M Sisa the same person as M J SisaI bought it because blurb was very similar to Dem Mikhaylov's Fortress of Hope and I loved that book before deleted him It was pretty similar and still uite goodI normally wouldn't even look at the blurb if the page count is not around 300 but for some reason I did this time Would I say it

  2. says:

    At the risk of being labeled by the author in his own words a “grammar nazi” which given 20th century history I find highly insult

  3. says:

    Good story if a little short I normally hate stories told from multiple perspectives but this author did it well while minimally interrupting t

  4. says:

    Another good book by this author I look forward to reading the next book in this series like I've been looking forward to reading boo

  5. says:

    Great characters and storyline Very satisfying read Not enough words the computer says so there how about this No how about now

  6. says:

    I have read alot in this genre This book is well paced but not a lot of character development and fairly brief Still the idea behind the book is a little different and I felt uite interesting I like the way the author didn't give the lead protagonist stupid hang ups just to stymy his progress and create extended issues for no reason Good for an easy read

  7. says:

    Love the characters love the reincarnation bit looks like it will be an epic tale in the future bookslook forward totgem

  8. says:

    Such an interesting and novel plot Each chapter is short and sweet and gets to the point Superb storytelling The grammatical errors every now and then does make me flinch but the story is definitely worth it It’s an easy read highly recommended to practically anyone at this point

  9. says:

    I bought this book mainly because of the reviews and I wish I hadn'tThe theme of the story is fine Old magician gets rein

  10. says:

    A solid opening novel following a fairly standard reincarnation plot line As with all these story types the main character is fairly OP but not to the extent of many I’ve read and the author has decided to focus around rebuilding and growing

  11. says:

    Yes we do get the I used to be a soldier until I took an arrow to the knee memeThe MC is an all powerful magic user who dies and is reincarnate

  12. says:

    Nothing technically wrong with the grammar or editing it's just the tale felt thinly written as if the plot was being skipped through uickly You didn't get to connect to anyone or even the worldThe magic was not really built up either Magic needs a little depth some rules and structureIt lacks any richness depth or world building IMHO

  13. says:

    Try this book on impulse so glad I did as once I started reading i could not stopIt does uses a bunch of fairly common tropes in this genre bu

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